I was sitting outside the other day and instead of sketching i thought i would try expressing the visuals i was thinking about in writing for a change. Not sure how it came out but i thought i would post it.
Walking through frozen sunshine
towards a feeling forced to belong
living in my own dwelling dream
would i force myself to wake
or do i embrace this blind fate
In a steal plate stream
I stop to look at my reflection
struggle to find the person i was
everything isn’t what it seems
The bars i put up have begun to crack
finding myself unable to see
just which side i belong
what if there is no pathway back
could i force myself to wake or do i embrace this blind fate
I love this poem! It looks into the depths of your mind and wonder exactly what is “blind fate?”
You need to explore your writing ability’s more than you think you do. Every one has the ability to write and anyone can tell a story and everyone has a different way of telling there story. I think you have a great ability to tell a story yet leave that blank space that leaves you with no option other than think about those words or lyrics. Thats a “knack” leave your reader or listener wanting more because this poem leaves you open and keeps your mind wondering and exploring every word. We all have certain things we could all be great at it’s a matter of finding time through this ” Daily Grind” to focus on what they really LOVE . Fuck money, Bills or any other bullshit reason we all come up with to cover up why we really don’t take time to find ourselfs and do what we were put on this earth to do, Love Ya Love the Poem